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>Balgair closed his eyes and felt the long-dormant bond between himself, Amelia, and Nell reawakened.

This feels... a bit odd. This feels like the description of the Warder bond from the Wheel of Time... but the reawakening bit feels... almost like the a computer put to sleep, and then turned back on again.

Almost like a computer put to sleep, and then snapping into awareness of the network it's attached to when brought back around. Not bad... just odd.

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