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This is awesome! Very rich and diverse. I look forward to more...

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The immersion from your language drew me in deeper to the fantasy setting. Really liked it.

Have you built out the entire language?

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Loved the use of language, and the description, this was awesome Joseph Wiess! Mind if I include it in to-day's post?

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Dark things linger where the three rivers meet. What schemes wait to be sown by those who wander the charnel fields beyond the fort? Is treachery the day's game, or do these unsettling battlefield wanderers have something else in mind?

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I have finally gotten around to reading this- and I love it! 🤗💕💕

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Good job!!!

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