My plans for the future

Just a little note.

Good Morning, my faithful followers and subscribers.

Thank you for giving me time to take care of my family after my Dad’s passing.

I thought I’d let you know what I’ve been doing since my last story post.

I have spent the last two weeks re-writing “Voyage of the Dawn Breaker.” I’ve added two chapters and almost 200 pages of new scenes. So far, the story is at 14 Chapters and is sitting at 46 thousand words. Right now, I am revising chapter eleven.

I’m tightening up some of the dialogue and trying to adjust the pacing. I forgot that this isn’t a three hour movie. I have as many pages as I want to use to tell the story.

So, what I’m thinking about doing, is maybe starting again, at Chapter one and posting the before and after, so you can see changes I made. Either that, Or I’ll finish the book and post pieces of it.

I’d be interested to hear what you want me to do.

So, this Wednesday, I’ll post the revised beginning of the book.

I will be running another Thorny Thursday, so you can look forward to that.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

A wizard sitting at a library desk